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"08.01.09 To you…"
  by floatingontheverb


08.01.09 To you…
Don\'t know if you call it erotic,. maybe more emotional... a little of both.

Exhale and slow down
Every sentence and thought inhaling the pronoun
Threaded through the fabric of our ocean that already trademarked our sound
Love and all it’s hurricanes that moaning previously drowned
Surround
To every quiver my shakes expound
You kiss profound

A beating heart that forgot how to pound
Touch me astound

Melting in your hands I keep untying my façade
Quickly revealing that my heart is pure and in all honesty humanly flawed
Exhale awed

I love this moment
Sliding between us in every increment
And we react to each muscle tangent
You ……love me in poignant
Patient
Without movement
Holding all of life breathing love without pre-judgment
Flowing with one current
Fluent

Swallow me pink pigment
Sunrise to sunset our bodies speak the same current
Suffocating moments and my mind swells pregnant
Of everything you color permanent

Call me peccant
Sprinkle me satin

Intertwine softness between my legs and over your back
Soft trembles repeating on playback
Smiles no longer switched indefinitely set silent impending attack
Your fingers slowly circle every curve and I am stuck in this sidetrack
Of your voice and how the sounds of movements become our late night soundtrack
Eyes slowly slipping and my hair sweptback
My dreaming future

My most missed flashback

Encompass
This….
Penetration of your spirit
Squeezing you tight slowly lift it

Muscles tense
I form thoughts in English but your kiss makes me moan and speak in French
Clench and ..
Unclench

Lips undone
Closing our eyes and washing away into the ocean blocking the sun
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Date Submitted: Oct 26, 2009 (01:38 AM)
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  L€€thal
12/13/09 (10:12 PM) 
mmm tasty EROTIC! everyone knows ho i just love wordplay and you be massaging the hell outta sum words girl! dayummm! gota fave five this joint. glad i decied to cum back to your first drop poet!

  ★Blessed...
11/14/09 (03:16 AM) 
I think that erotica starts with the emotions. I could smell the salt in the ocean's water and feel the breeze in my hair. Your words have a way of taking others on a journey even if it is to a place deep within. I want to dive into another piece, but like I do with my chocolate candy - I will save some for later. Thanks for sharing your gifts.

  tngrl
11/09/09 (09:32 AM) 
whoa... this is my type of erotic... like i've said before your work is a bit over my head but i was def feeling this one! LOVED LOVED LOVED where you wrote 'Flowing with one current Fluent' idk. that jus spoke to me! this was sooooo sexy girl! LOVED IT!!!

  Brokenvegtable
10/30/09 (11:31 PM) 
i really loved this ... it was very erotic to me ... this is how i think erotic work should be ... very subtle and calm .... loving and gentle .... i would write like this but i dont think many would find it appealing coming from me ... as i have one up now thats more light then most and it doesnt get any comments on it so ... why go deeper and lighter if its not gona me worth it for me to do so .... and its really why i dont do much erotic any more ... i think people on here would not enjoy it ...
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  Poetry Love
10/30/09 (09:19 PM) 
i love the disjointed love that you described here. It was most definitely erotic and It felt so nice...

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