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"1 becomes 2, 4 days away"
  by kinnaird


"1 becomes 2, 4 Days Away"

I MISS YOU, i LOVE U in more ways to say,
ONE becomes TWO just FOUR days away,
Your relatives are in town, but where will they stay,
and your questions seem dumb like who can make cake;
you're lost, you're confused, you're racing, you're rushing,
nothing is right, you're late and you're fussing,
everythings out of order, you're shaking, you're cussing,
but at the end of the day, its worth it, you're blushing,
you lay down to sleep, the blessings the same,
Tomorrow you shop to make dresses the same,
you conquered the heart, next is the brain,
your changing your life, next is your name,
Three days are gone, today is the day,
tears roll down your fathers face as he gives you away,
but sumthn is missing, where is the groom,
the best man hands you a note that he finds in a room,
I know u dont love me, for me here it ends,
look closely at your brides maids, ure missing a friend,
your heart is confused, you're torn between men,
how could you do this to me, so close to a kin,
she began to cry and turn away from the priest,
and told everyone it was off but to still enjoy the feast,
then a voice cried out, release the doves,
marry me please for i am whom you seek to love,
you can still get married, but who gave her the hope,
for the voice that cried out WAS THE MAN THAT GAVE HER THE NOTE,

louiskinnaird
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Date Submitted: Sep 26, 2008 (09:37 AM)
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  smooch
11/21/08 (10:30 AM) 
ohhh wow that was offf the chain i love the ending i did not expect that one at all love the way it ended

  llovely
10/31/08 (11:35 AM) 
awww! that was the shit! i woulda been mad as hell! i aint liein. WHAT! that was so unexpected but it just made he whole poem beyond worth the time ispent reading it.

  Bigsexii_hdt
10/27/08 (11:48 AM) 
THIS IS SUPER!!!!!!!! TYTE ITS BOMB

  B.Jazzie
10/15/08 (06:08 PM) 
deeeeeep Bruh 4 real.

  MrsShakur1
10/14/08 (02:06 PM) 
You did it again, and i gotta say that i'm lovin' your writin' sytle. But in this story, i loved how you've captured the feelings and emotions that women deal with preparin' for a wedding. And i really loved how this story had a twist to it cause the happily ever after that i thought was gone happen didn't happen. But it still was a happy ending. Anyway, keep up the good work. 10 stars Baby..........

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