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"1 Year For Every Tear.."
  by DaddysGirl416
  - This Poem is a response to the poem LOVE LOCKDOWN by "Word$mith"


So you presented me with a fake?
Damn, all along I thought your love was mines to take

Ha-Ha! Guess the jokes on me
So blinded by “our love”… I couldn’t even see..

..See that you were playing me for a FOOL
In your life, I thought I was the EXCEPTION to every rule

Yeah, you got a juvie record & a strike, too…I know all about your past
But what we shared was BETTER, something of SUBSTANCE that was built to LAST

You’re not like the other convicts…YOU do possess the key
If you weren’t going to release yourself, why even bother with me?

Loving a PRISONER has been HARD
waiting to sneak you my love while avoiding getting caught by the "patrolling guard"

I NEVER betrayed your trust or gave you a reason to doubt
You’re lookin at ME “side-ways”…Tell me what’s that all about?

I did my best to keep your morale high
Imagine how devastated I am to discover this was all a lie

Guess all those “congical visits” to you didn’t mean shit
Maybe we were fucking but I swore I heard you tell me you loved me while you were hitting it

Parole? Brotha, PLEASE!!! You deserve to be remain behind bars
You’re guilty of murdering my spirit, stealing my heart & leaving behind incriminating scars

All of these crimes were committed in the first degree..
Are you, the defendant, ready to enter your plea?

Well, your fingerprints are all over the place
I went down to the precinct in-person to identify your face

The nerve you have to expect sympathy from the court
The least you could do is show a litlle remorse

I was the defense attorney’s star witness
I would swear on the bible & testify for you with the quickness

But that was before you CLOSED that door
You can barricade yourself in, I don’t care anymore

So in conclusion... You can keep your fucking decoy! Cause I deserve the real thing
I was genuine with you but with my feelings & emotions, you were just toying.

“Alleged” may have got OJ off but it won’t work for you

The jury is in

The verdict is GUILTY

SO WE ARE OFFICIALLY THREW!

Your sentence….

1 Year for Every Tear

… See you next LIFE time!

You made a Fool of Me - Meshell
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Date Submitted: Sep 16, 2008 (06:33 PM)
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  mS.CEECEE
07/14/09 (01:27 AM) 
i love this! u have a serious talent!!

  Lil Mamma Rena
06/22/09 (12:13 PM) 
Damn i cant even describe how much you read my mind in this write u words are to the t If u made it rain theese words id bee under the weather so u got much love for ur inspiring talent good bless u 10 starz

  Nilla
06/18/09 (01:22 PM) 
o, yea. this was THAT shit. =D i'm glad i decided to touch down and show some love, mama. 'cause this piece was RAW and CREATiVE. and is officially a fave of mine. wonderfully penned. loved the raw emotion running through this piece.

  Holly132
06/09/09 (01:17 PM) 
dammmn i like this your flow is FOR REALLLL MAAAAMMMAAAA this is really gud.. keep it up. nice nice man nIIICCCCEE LOL ++]

  bbeauty
05/29/09 (10:34 AM) 
I REALLY LOVE THE TITLE OF THIS WRITE...HEART PROVOKING....YOU PUT THE PEN ON THIS......B BLESS

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