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"1,2 (Girl version)"
  by Neece
  - This Poem is a response to the poem 1, 2 by big josh


One, two i wana put my lips on u
Three, four i'm already on the floor
Five, six ima take that dick
Seven, eight yo pussy lickin is great
Nine, ten i wana fuq again
One, two ima suck on u
Three, four eat this pussy sum more
Five, six I wana ride that dick
Seven, eight yo dick in my mouth feels great
Nine, ten Im almost done but lets do it again
One, two ima scratch a tattoo on u
Three, four ima bounce this pussy on ya dick sum more
Five, six let me use my tongue ring on yo dick
Seven, eight I wana suck it real good please stand up straight
Nine, ten tomorrow beat this pussy up again

**JUS A RESPONSE..NUN SPECIAL**
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Date Submitted: Feb 02, 2009 (12:55 AM)
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  Lyrical Dragon
11/08/09 (07:28 PM) 
one, two that's sum funny shit.

  Psychosis Aka ...
11/04/09 (12:28 PM) 
tell em what you want ! say dat ish say it. Love those submission nights great write !

  June-Bug
11/03/09 (10:51 PM) 
that shit was just RAW! just like I like. lol But forreal i liked it a lot. I liked the humor in it...and aggressiveness in it. men just love aggressive women:-) Keep pushin that pen mama...and check me out when u get the chance!

  Sunkissed25
11/03/09 (09:37 PM) 
oooooo yall so nasty lol!!! This was hot...great response!

  big josh
02/02/09 (12:57 AM) 
lol dis was a nice response lil shorty

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