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"120 Dayz..."
  by Mints


March 2nd was the day she pronounced to the world to be mine

I wasnt sure what was in store for us but i was ready for the ride

Day 2 of the relationship drama started with my ex

my gurl told me she dont like drama and she aint worried about it

my ex was crazy i guess in "love" she say

she slashed my tire, tried to key my whip, and tried to fight my bay

but my gurl wasnt havin dat

she went bak at ole gurl tit-4-tat

ha ha man ya gurl ride or die for ya boy

i mean i aint never seen a girl switch modes to seek and destroy

30 dayz n the relationship n all was well

until ya boi started hearin "tall" tales

bout a gurl that was a ho and dat could neva be true

but in the end the haters like usaul didnt evn have a clue

spring break hit and i knew my gurl was 100% real

those were the best days of my life like truly ideal

I mean i kno it sound like im braggin but whoeva was wit her let something special go

but im not mad im happy they didnt kno

i thank god everyday for allowin me to meet her and lettin her and her ex's split

because her ex's had a diamond n the rough and didnt have the eyes to see it.

120 Dayz...N Countin....

_____________________________
YA BOI IS BAK it's been too long but im bak on the map bak to my roots i got a lot to get out and im happy i found a way bak to this afta two yrs.
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Date Submitted: Jul 01, 2009 (02:56 PM)
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  ~*lyriks*~
07/14/09 (08:29 PM) 
damn i liks dis its sweet... i lik hw u describe the trials yall go thru & yall still managed 2mak it... great.. 10 4rm me

  BSavvy
07/06/09 (09:37 PM) 
Awww! this is too sweet.... Glad you found your diamond in the rough.... Sounds to me you are truly in love..... Enjoy your happiness and just live in the moment savoring each and every day....

  *Tha Scorpion*
07/06/09 (10:27 AM) 
Well expressed mayne, I like how ya did this, very storylike!!

  Takeitlikeman1...
07/06/09 (03:36 AM) 
It's always a good thing to appreciate what you have, and you have done a beautiful job expressin' it. Good write, 9 strz

  Jody
07/06/09 (02:25 AM) 
well welcome back and love the happiness in this... go on and enjoy them days! ; )

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