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"17 is the new 20"
  by Group: Poetic Prodigies





Babygirl you say i'm not in your interest
but talking about age is senseless
peep game, I could buy you a drink like T-Pain
I got connects and I ain't talkin bout the weed mayne
I've been in the real world for a minute
Got my own car and I pay for my own rent
So watchu talking about?
some older guys living in they mothers house, can you figure that out?
I don't got a job, I hold a career
I'm into real estate, make five zeros a year
You say it's against law to touch a younger man
but I know girls not regretting they got 5 to 10
you can't upgrade me I got nextel, baby I excel
check the size condoms in my wallet, XL
The only time i'm associated wit 7-11, it's a crap game
give you so much Ice, you thought I was back in the crack game
you afraid of my mama, look who's the youngin
I have my own apartment, you gots to be buggin
So if you think i'm just talkin shit
remember older guys will leave you for a younger chick

Jerome A.K.A King A.K.A Underground King

(I can make you feel 17 again)
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Date Submitted: Apr 25, 2007 (08:34 PM)
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  SEDUCTION
05/01/07 (11:25 PM) 
man this was hot real talk it cant get no better you explained yourself perfectly im lovin the line "so you think im talkin shit remember older guys will leave you for a younger chick" this was hot

  sexxy brown su...
04/29/07 (11:54 PM) 
you can make me feel 17 again....well to have all that you doing your thing then.

  mZ*p03+!K k0T0...
04/28/07 (01:53 AM) 
DAHM THIS WAS ALL THE WAY HOT HELLA CREATIVE AND YOU CAME REAL CAUSE I KNOW MOST OF THESE YOUNG DUDES GETTING THEY STUFF TOGETHER MORE THAN THE OLDER ONES IS THATS WASSUP KEEP DOING YOU I GOTTA MAKE THIS A FAVE 1LOVE AND HOT WRITE

  SylenceThePOET
04/26/07 (07:30 PM) 
Lmao @ the last line, this was a classic kid. Loved the "youcant upgrade me, i got nextel" line,lol. i like this alot, but i think i've inferred that,LOL

  MaN DiNgO
04/26/07 (12:35 AM) 
hahaaaa yo I'm feelin this shit ri here cuz we on da same grind ma nig. this is def a fav for me...keep it blazin man...I mite hav to respond to this lol

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