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"2 against 1"
  by Poetic Aquarian
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Poetic Aquarian Fantasy by shaybaby69


I told ya'll it wasn't ova, it's only the beginning...

Two sets of soft skin, where do one as I begin
To please these sensually driven females, having them weak in the knees
Do I start with the sweet nothings that lead to physical somethings?
Do I get straight into it, no words, no teasing, no bluffing
How bout I go for what I know works
Shay, I know how to make it rain with you, so I'm gonna start with candy first
Spilling my words into the cup of her ears
While slowly fulfilling each word, receiving satisfying cheers
Known as moans, Shay in the back releasing groans
Of both pleasure and impatience, getting wetter off of Candy's voice tone
I lick the clit with strong tongue strokes and flicks
Nipples get the same treatment before I get in 'em and hit
Candy is nice and moist, Shay got a mouthful of her breast
They both tryna to wear me out, but I'm up for the test
Kisses to my chest since they both wanna go down
Taking turns with what they both want from me; both of em being turned on by the sounds
I make since I barely able to take what they both giving to me at the same time
Bend Shay right on over and give it to her from behind
Smacking her ass while she feels the back shots in her spine
Cnady getting Shay's tongue in her, she must done came like 10 times
Now one rides the tongue and the other rides the dick
Switch roles so they both get the same amount of tongue and dick
All this pornographic action going on, you'd think we'd work for West Coast Productions
Nah, I'm just doing my erotic duty, giving 2 sexy ass females that orgasmic climatic combustion
Over and over again like the counting of days
And it works to my advantage since they go both ways
So even if I'm eventually wore down, no frowns to this event
I'll watch as these two lovelys give each other all they got until they both spent
Hence 2 against 1, cause I'm the one and they are the 2
But I like those kinda odds against them, how about you??

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Date Submitted: Sep 06, 2007 (02:52 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 09/07/07 (01:31 PM)
Author: candy-b
Poem Title: STRAIGHT HOOKED

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comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  Leta Lea
10/25/07 (01:13 PM) 
WOW....Cory,Cory, Cory....now u kno....lol oh wait thats a comment on a personal joke so that I wont put here but it fits my thoughts...I knew u was a freak but right here u made it clear.... :) NASTY

  quita101
10/12/07 (11:07 PM) 
WELL...............I'M JUS SPEECHLESS

  shaybaby69
09/06/07 (04:46 PM) 
you damn right this aint ova lol im lovinggggggggggg this cory hmmm gotta think of something real good for that ass we might not collab might hit you wit our single joints on this hmmmm me and candy must talk lol this most def went hard tho!!!

  candy-b
09/06/07 (03:34 PM) 
Cory baby...its not polite to get me all aroused while im at work...lol...but i see you can finish wha you started and im not sure if i can get any nastier...wait, im lyin...hol up, i'll get back to you...u right this aint ova

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