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"2 timer"
  by Silent_Loc
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I need her by MZ.Philosophy


i used to try to fucc with sucsess
but i found out she was realy fantasy
she reached out her hand to me
i didnt know she was scammin me
so me, i was finna get her bacc and went strait to defeat
to make her mad i made tapes of me and her she and me
and fantasy didnt like it i cant say i did either
see i loved fantasy i could live with her if i wasnt able to see her
and defeat was a motha fucca and clingy
wouldnt let go of me every time she seen me
so i would 2 time with fantasy and i knew she wouldnt tell
but her cousin reality is a bitch sent from hell
see, reality would tell me about myself she was a hater by nature
she pull so many dudes but not all of them can take her
and defeat, she was gettin suspectful that i was cheatin
late nights almost every day she said "there aint that many meetins"
and sucsess the dime piece fantacys sister was eyein me
reality tryin me
defeat keepin a close eye on me
i got to make a move and make it soon make it the best
so here i go the next few weeks chasin after sucsess
and i guess droppin the other chiccs would have been best
but the relationships were too complex
defeat wouldve known i was cheatin so i waouldve been that dirty ass nigga
and reality loves her cousin i know i cant fight her she pulls triggas
now im trapped in a love sqare three of them and one of me
sucsess is high maintainence she looks good...is she for me?
defeat is always there but not the way on want her to be
and fantacy is comfort but with her i wont get far
fucc it I'll go look for hope thats my homie shes the best by far
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Date Submitted: Sep 09, 2009 (11:16 PM)
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  MZ.Philosophy
09/10/09 (11:08 AM) 
ok i feel you on this..im comin wit a response lol..10stars

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