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"2007 - CPR (Save Me Stranger)"
  by brda


There's no point in saying
that I'm gonna be staying.
Whether I live or die;
all depends on how hard you try.

Try a little harder.
Go a little longer.
Don't you stop.
Don't you cry.
Please, don't you let me die.

Emergency services on their way
- the ambo's still quite far away.
Don't stop.
Please, don't stop.
I know I'm not quite gone,
nor am I quite there.
Stranger; won't you breathe for me one more time?

Please, don't let me go,
go God-knows where.
I'm not ready.
Not quite yet.
Not right now.
Not like this anyhow.

I have not had the chance to say thanks.
Thanks for trying,
Stranger, whose name I will never hear.
Kind stranger, your attempts were very near
success.

Yet death came for me this day.
Oh the reaper did take me away.
Thank-you stranger is all I can say,
although you shall remain nameless to me,
I can't thank 'ye
nearly enough.

© Danni Goldring, 2007
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Date Submitted: Aug 24, 2007 (11:08 PM)
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  Scriptixz
08/26/07 (08:12 AM) 
WOW!!!!!!!! this concept blew me away!!!!! now that's what i'm talking about! something different...something so totally capturing it's like playing right before me! how you brought the character to life...true storytelling right there! :)

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