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"2007 - Self Conscious"
  by brda


In this self conscious shell I am dying,
These tears I'm afraid of crying.
Introverted as can be,
none know the real me.
Can you get past my wall?
It is at least ten metres tall.
To one such as thee,
This may not seem such a great height
but try as hard as you might;
your ladder cannot reach it right.

I would offer you a hand,
If I so could dare.
Doing so would be to me,
one horrid nightmare.
So you're gonna have to come and get me
On your own.
The way to here, not yet known.
I would draw you a map
but I lack the paper and pen.
My saviour,
My extrovert,
Can you make it past the wall?
Past all of metres ten?

© Danni Goldring, 2007
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Date Submitted: Jun 24, 2007 (09:35 AM)
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  Scriptixz
07/04/07 (10:45 AM) 
*shakes head* yes, the challenge...daring..."So you're going to have to come and get me On your own." the tone of this...it really speaks to me...it's nowhere near a plea...a challenge lingering on disappointment...

  Jez
06/28/07 (03:23 AM) 
I like the way that the wall is almost a dare.

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