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"(2)Real…distance"
  by Budderflibecks






My soul’s eye vision
seems clearer
and my thoughts
leap out into wide
open spaces…

no longer contemplating
closing doors to my
heart’s valves…
it was more
than words you
spoken to me
that coaxed me
to let you in….

You have melted this
icy heart…and have shown
me God given warmth
I bask in your love…
it is a gift…

No worries…as
words leap off pages
walk into our divided
spaces- reach into
our separate lives
and mull over ways
to mend physical
gaps…

mentally…emotions
bond spirits in attempts
to reach pinnacles
that have never
been scaled

Images of us
as we fly seamlessly on
impassioned wings
playing over
stinging sensations
of desired pleasures

Your voice
coursing through
my subconscious
uttering tones
streaming vibrations…
of your anticipations…
yet no expectations…
so no fears…

Materialized moments
ring bells with assurance
of bridged gaps within time…
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Date Submitted: Apr 12, 2008 (10:02 AM)
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  jamal
04/13/08 (11:18 PM) 
WHOOOO... YA IMAGERY IS FLAWLESS MA LOVIN THIS

  JuJu Kangol
04/13/08 (05:26 PM) 
"mentally...emotions bond spirits in attempt to reach pinnacles that have never been scaled"........Shut Yo Mouf1.....DOPE DOPE DOPE!!!!!!

  ...Da Futurist...
04/13/08 (09:13 AM) 
ahhh amel.. sheesh killing me... i like parts of this poem where you held onto verbal memories as inspiration strength & motiviation to keep the adorement alive...Peace

  B. Rose
04/12/08 (01:41 PM) 
Wow... this was deep... especially that stanza where you endedd it with desired pleasue im feeling that yo... hot ness

  ataraxia
04/12/08 (01:04 PM) 
Hearts defy miles, love creates paths earth couldn't imagine, as the journey of souls when love is destination, make seperation impossible. Touching in ways only imagined by envious fingertips of flesh lovers, knowing the truth of another, souls submitting and connecting, for real. Gentle sentiment, thanks for sharing this sis.

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