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"3rd Year Around"
  by DaDutchezz
  - This Poem is a response to the poem The Freshman by El Diablo


first day of skoo
3rd time around..
that makes me a
junior
you would think
i would be used to walkin
thru them doors
NOPE!!
jus the look...
Mobtown Sr. High School..
makes me hate the situation
more and more

"will this year be lik the last?"
"will they judge me b/c of my present
and not remember my past?"

also reppin
the six color rainbow

i tell myself...
"alex..its coo...
jus go wit the flow"

been in the same damn
place for 3 yrs...
yet i still cant stand
to be here...
they dnt know me
they think they do...
but we all kno that aint tru

imma make it this year
wnt let them make me
shed them tears...
i cnt..
i wnt..

i wnt let them rock this
boat
cuz this ship is sailin
no sinkin...

this ship makin it to shore
until then...
im the lonely
June-Your


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Date Submitted: Aug 25, 2007 (11:12 PM)
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  Jicki
08/29/07 (03:40 AM) 
i liked this...i read the poem this is in response to and it goes very well with the concept. keep ur heads up and y'all got it. them 4 years don't mean that much. everything after does, tho. remember that.

  princessnikki
08/26/07 (11:58 AM) 
im really feelin this...like ur style

  InFamouZ1
08/26/07 (10:11 AM) 
I likes this right here the way it went through the way it flowed was nice you did a great job

  *BMORES FINEST...
08/26/07 (03:38 AM) 
damn dis wuz gud 4real. can feel u on dis one alot cuz it makes alot of since. u must not like dat skool or sumthin that happened there in the past but the truth is to let the past go. but gud write. 10strrz

  PoeticPassion
08/25/07 (11:58 PM) 
i'm feelin this

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