Im glad I read Beautiful Soul's comment cuz I didn't even look at it like that at first.. Like the 5 shorties.. one stanza for each.. I read it as one tormented life.. damn.. this is deep on mad different levels.. Made me so sad.. especially cuz its so true to life.. I think the one I relate to is the =i lie to myself at least once a day when I say I dont love you= that one hit close to home.. And the last one?!? Damn.. that made me want to cry and you penned that in a way I've never heard an a...
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Im glad I read Beautiful Soul's comment cuz I didn't even look at it like that at first.. Like the 5 shorties.. one stanza for each.. I read it as one tormented life.. damn.. this is deep on mad different levels.. Made me so sad.. especially cuz its so true to life.. I think the one I relate to is the =i lie to myself at least once a day when I say I dont love you= that one hit close to home.. And the last one?!? Damn.. that made me want to cry and you penned that in a way I've never heard an abortion described before.. the recession one had me laughing! lol.. 10 stars to this.. a very creative write!
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