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"A change must come"
  by NICKY BOO


I want to travel to another dimension
a dimension where emotion has no limits.
somewhere that transforms my whole mentality,
for it is corrupted with a mysterious weakness
I have to go quickly so i'm running fast,
Im seeking a change, so somethings gotta give.
Im no longer accepting satins passion
which happens to be my weakness and deepest insecurity.
I must take advantage of the limited hope that I own
so that I can invest in strength
so courage please don't fail me now.
Allow me to escape the suffering....
for I am lost within myself,
incarcerated in my own body,
but I will escape using this breakthrough as bail.
I am transforming into the person I always wanted to be..
well at least its easy to say,
I seem to be lost in the darkness lacking guidance.
what my future holds, im not sure,
but I will search, and I will find.
A change must come.
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Date Submitted: Jul 17, 2009 (10:28 PM)
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  big josh
09/30/09 (08:49 AM) 
I like the compassion you put in this piece when you wrote it. hot piece

  bookum
07/23/09 (12:29 AM) 
wow...im lovin this bay. the wordplay was amazing. " i am no longer accepting satins passions..which happens to be my weakeness and deepest insecurity. that line was deep. you are really connecting with writes emotionally. you are becoming a spectacular writing...

  daidai_dts4l
07/19/09 (11:41 PM) 
you are really improving your skills sis. your level of thought and emotion you bring to your poems clearly increased. keep growin please =)

  leezymleezy
07/18/09 (11:35 PM) 
i see ur enhancing your prior mediocre vocabulary...however your expansion still pales in comparison to mine...I concur on everything you just said...we are our own worst enemies..

  Chocolate City
07/18/09 (02:34 PM) 
first off.. i was gon quote the line mzSpoon pointed out.. that was deep.. i like how u dug deep in yourself to seek your problem.. your weaknesses and insecurities are the satans blockage from u finding your strenghts.. you have to excape that to define the brighter side of you.. and find ways out the darkness.. im likin this one.. a nice start for a change

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