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"A conversation between strangers"
  by getchamndrite


A smile slid wide across my face as I experienced the beauty of this conversation unfolding
Complete strangers’ elation combining and evolving from questions of linguistics to-
In unison
“PRINCIPESSA!!”
Adoration for “Life is Beautiful”
Radiating from each syllable of each word spoken
Drawn was I
Completely an outsider observing, sensing, experiencing
These two strangers
Gushing about a story of hope

Stranger #1
Somewhat quiet and timid
Upperclass and corporate-ish
Any layer of staunchness or snood melted away as her eyes began to glisten, and sparkle
Teeth quickly, joyfully, reminiscingly revealed

Stranger #2
Joyful and upbeat
Rasta hat adorned dreadhead
Laid back and social
Momentum of speech gained as excitement grew

Recalling the happening I fall in love with the experience
Witnessing the touchstone between two lives
Two paths
Uniting them..even if just for that moment
And above all
That which these strangers adored –
HOPE
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Date Submitted: Dec 27, 2008 (06:12 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (8)
  Luvlee
03/18/09 (10:51 AM) 
i love dropping in on an intimate moment shared between complete strangers i guess thats why growing up i people watched because everyone has a story!!! nicely written!!

  Poets1stVrse
01/11/09 (10:18 AM) 
Unique in the sense that's relative to the word. This write exemplefies how we are inspired by our surroundings...Great write..Mos def a ten

  dontnohow
01/08/09 (11:04 AM) 
hope.... sumthin we all need.... and strangers r great... great feelings had new feeling had... 10stars

  big josh
01/05/09 (03:31 PM) 
I really like dis one, 10s ma much luv

  11th Wonduh
01/03/09 (06:45 PM) 
i like how you interpreted and recorded this observation. from this write, i got to see the actual conversation from your words and seeing the commonality between them and the potential unison of love forming. well said

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