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"A Dark Illusion"
  by NyamhPoetry


A dark illusion

Present everytime
You forget to think

Let your mind wander

Fingertips, crawl up your spine
Reaching over, whispering sly nothings

And then banish me
A distraction, anything
But my chiming voice lingers, surrounding

Your eyes see reality
I'm present however, clouding the view

And it escapes you
Your mine again
Mine to haunt

Your own creation
A conjuration
A poison
Blackening a scarlet river

Others take you to heaven, and then flow away
But this enchantment is timeless
You can choose to enjoy it, either way
I exsist only to your eye

And I am very much, alive
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Date Submitted: Jul 13, 2009 (07:26 PM)
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  santiago\\\\\\...
10/06/09 (05:14 PM) 
your style..... it's very mood based isnt it?... you change drastically with you word usage and ability to ''say'' without ''saying'' ... you are more than you know my fox... though i can't help but think there is still more.....but how can i bring this out....hmmmm..... to much talent to hide nya'.....even more than myself...

  Reppin Bronx
07/23/09 (11:06 AM) 
Your own creation a cnjuration a poison blackening a scarlet river....so beautifully captivated..

  Greg Gatsby
07/14/09 (12:43 PM) 
bravo young star. i like this one. whispering sly nothings was a great line. real deep love awesome

  stranger
07/14/09 (02:46 AM) 
Sugar ... that is beautiful ...

  *~Raw Sensuali...
07/13/09 (08:07 PM) 
WOW... I write so much poetry... I had to go back and reread mine cuz I forgot which piece it was.... you did a PHENOMENAL job with this response... eerily lovely...

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