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"A Flow Like Halitosis"
  by Variator


my flow is sick but your is halitosis
my rhymes are best and yours are just grossest
your dragon breaths like the eternal bog of stench
it could gag a maggot half to death and melt a monkey wrench
shit that's pretty bad paint peels near ceiling fans
seriously? damn i aint ever heard of that
yeah your words are slurred and i'd prefer
if you came on stage with interpreters
worthless worm you purchase sperm from whores
gobble wads to earn a spot on bukakke tours
when you talk im bored pauly shore
so half the time folks ignore your lines
you lie its live im not impressed
to me this shit is easy dog your seeming oh so stressed
my streak has endless depths these leagues are put to tests
this choreographed mortar attack brings death upon request
i crept in to sever neckless bobble heads that nod and grin
just count this interception when i take the ball and win

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Date Submitted: Nov 07, 2009 (01:55 AM)
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  leethal
11/07/09 (03:44 PM) 
HAHAHA NICE DROP POET! "i crept in to sever neckless bobble heads that nod and grin" THAT WAS A NICE DROP RIGHT THERE

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