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"*a forsaken angel * (paragon thread from thug lov)"
  by harley quinn/a fallen angel


*a forsaken angel *

Inebriating beauty
So full of despair
beyond heartfelt
Translations
lost in empty stares

Felt within
deep to the core
An angel lies helpless
Battered and scorned

How could he hurt her
When he says
he loves her so much

How could she believe
That this is what love becomes

Blaming herself
For what he has done
Saddened with guilt
Because self-esteem is gone

Broken beyond mending
When so withdrawn
Hid from the world
most walk on by

Never helping her see
Because they close their own eyes
Blinding her to truth
Binding her to his lies

An angel whose fallen
Never learning to fly
Til the day he when to far
Now she lives in her own mind

Frozen in that moment
Beauty fades in time
now his angel slowly dies...

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Date Submitted: Nov 30, 2008 (10:38 AM)
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  The Mad Poet
12/01/08 (10:27 AM) 
So smooth & eloquent with your words...Every syllable just sliding down the page with so much grace...You have me inebriated off your words...LOL...Nicely done boo...Much love & respect

  Blakfiya
11/30/08 (11:01 PM) 
yea...this is that fall from grace. I think I love the language, seems most soft and romantic in describing a wrenching thing - when love loses its grip and perhaps resentments and loathing enter the picture.

  --->ROXIE<---
11/30/08 (10:45 AM) 
i just loved the way u started this off....it had a certain rhythm to it that played out in my head as i read it...again...nicely done

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