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"A GOOD MAN TREATED WRONG"
  by TWANGINU


SHE COMES HOME LATE
GETS IN BED LIKE NOTHING IS WRONG
SLEEPS SO PEACEFULLY
I CANT SLEEP THO...
I SLEEP WITH MY EYES OPEN
I LOOK AT THE BACK OF HER HEAD EVERYNIGHT
YOU SAID YOU WANTED A GOOD MAN...HUH
BUT YOU REALLY DONT...PLEASE
STOP LYING TO YOURSELF
BUT I DONT SAY NOTHING CAUSE I DONT WANT PROBLEMS
THE GOOD MAN AS I AM...I THINK ONE DAY YOU WILL SEE IT
BUT AS DAYS GO BY...I FEEL LIKE THE FOOL
I FEEL LIKE A .....
BUT I'M THE GOOD MAN YOU WANTED
SO I TELL YOU WHATS ON MY HEART
AND YOU LAUGH...
SAYING IM TRIPPING...JUST CHILL
I EVEN SAY I WOULD LEAVE
AND YOU SAY NIGGA PLEASE...
IM A GOOD MAN AND I DONT LIKE TO FUSS
BUT I SPEAK MY MIND
AND YOU WOULDNT LISTEN...
SO MY HEART I PUT BACK IN A BOX
AND GUARD IT WITH A BIG LOCK
THREW AWAY THE MASTER KEY
AND LET YOU DO YOU AND ITS COOL WITH ME
YOU AINT HURTING ME
SO NOW WHEN YOU COME HOME...I WONT BE THERE
ITS MY TURN...
DONT WAIT UP FOR ME
I'LL BE HOME... JUST A LIL LATE
IM THE GOOD MAN YOU WANTED THO
BUT ITS COOL...MY LOVE
THE LOVE YOU COULD HAVE HAD IS WITH SOMEONE BETTER
AND A GOOD MAN AS I AM...SHE KNOWS IT
SEES IT...LOVES IT
AND TREATS A GOOD MAN...
LIKE A GOOD MAN SHOULD
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Date Submitted: Jan 31, 2009 (05:58 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/14/09 (09:47 PM)
Author: smily
Poem Title: OPEN YOUR HEART

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comment icon  COMMENTS (24)
  blackandmild19...
03/19/09 (01:41 PM) 
damn dog, this piece is me 100 percent, dog. u touch my heart wit thisone man. 10 starz off top. i want2 cry rite now. somebody felt what i did

  VIC
03/17/09 (02:11 AM) 
Love it!! i am upset that females do this get good men and then toy with their hearts. if you hurt a woman she will be mad for some time and then get over it, but if you hurt a man he never gets over it!! im glad that you found peace!!

  .MeZM3RiZiNG.
03/10/09 (02:38 PM) 
I'm glad 2 see it from a mans perspective.Wat ya think & feel,w e're so used 2 hearing & seeing women go threw this on a everyday basis that when it comes from a man it sorta throws u back a bit. Great write :)

  cocoadiva
03/10/09 (12:46 PM) 
i loved this poem and could relate... lol i am a good woman done wrong... excellent write..

  gangtalicious
02/14/09 (06:18 PM) 
yo dis was reali nice i can kinda relate 2 wat ur sayn 10 stars

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