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"A Heart Left In Critical Condition"
  by ARCH ANGEL


How can 1 move on
When their heart has a flat
How can 1 love again
When their hearts been detatched
How can I heal when
I thought I found my perfect match
Only to find out
she walked and never came back

How can I smile when
My happiness has now left
Just Filled with despair
My only thoughts are regrets
Except for the thoughts
Of when me and her met
Been Tested by fate
Hope faith pasts the test
Can't sleep because I see her
And with that how can 1 rest
The pain won't passover
Its a paracite that made a nest

They say Time heals all wounds
Well its forever in waiting
Because all of me left with her
So now I'm left vacant
And if I see her when I sleep
Then why does life wake me?
And if the pain dwells over me
Then God why can death take me?

let me whisper I love you
With the last breaths I take
On my tombstone it reads
""Death by Heartache""
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Date Submitted: Sep 15, 2009 (05:27 PM)
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  dontnohow
10/07/09 (09:17 AM) 
it gets better honey.. but I have been here to many times in my life time tho...

  smooch
09/20/09 (04:40 PM) 
this was a emotional piece and i also can relate it is hard to get over people when u put ur all into them and they end up hurting u more thasn u could imagine anyway hot poem this is def a fav keep up the great work

  AR-15
09/15/09 (11:23 PM) 
A very relatable piece of poetry.. "They say Time heals all wounds, Well its forever in waiting, Because all of me left with her"...something deep right there... it's hard to get over ongoing pain.... nicely written

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