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"A Lesson Learned....."
  by *BMORES FINEST*


My mind wonders my mind ponders
Longer than it ever has
Im feelin mad but more sad no room for gladness
Lovin the mist of the rain but miss the mrs.
Missing her more than ever, damn me trying to be clever
A kiss here a kiss there, now emotions run everywhere
Bestfreinds went to lover but the lovers never made it under the covers
I miss being smuthered, my heart is ice cold
I wanna ripp it out and sell it, sold
Ill even throw in my soul
Better yet just keep the money and gold
I rather have her more
Shes my bestfreind but she'll never understand how i feel
Shes the only one with the power to heal
I wish she would come and steal my heart
But shes gone with another man
Didnt even have time to reach out my hand
Maybe ill just wait or maybe i have another soulmate
But i want her as my soulmate
I made a huge mistake, why for goodness sake
I shouldve chose her first back then
Im not saying im letting her go as freind
But have to except that this is the end
When i see her ill smile and grin
But i have to remember that she has him.....
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Date Submitted: Jan 19, 2009 (06:32 PM)
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  dagirl2fly4hat...
06/05/09 (04:01 PM) 
aww dis was deep n awesum keep it up

  Lisa20
01/20/09 (11:36 PM) 
awww awww really nice, sad and deep i understand this completely this was really nice i mean reALLY I LIKE. 10

  YuNeek
01/19/09 (07:17 PM) 
Nice write. =) I realyy enjoyed it.

  todayistomorro...
01/19/09 (07:04 PM) 
now this was hot.i can really relate.10

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