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"A Letter Doughboy (Rest In Paradise)"
  by B. Rose
  - This Poem is a response to the poem DOUGH BENEATH MY FINGERTIPS... by --->QUEENPIN OF THE INK P...


Dear Doughboy,

Or shall I say Tamon.
My big homey wish we could of chilled before.
The spring showers washed away your spirit.
Now in paradise is where you rest I feel it.
Those who read your scribes can feel it.
Words painted on the canvas
You put your heart in it.
To me your style resembles Roxie's.
Its like yall speak to your pens
And the ink does the talking.
Then moist pages ignite.
Not just from the ink
Cause whats penned makes the lines cry.
So excuse me
While I make this scribe perfrom that.
Speaking from the heart no this is not a rap.
For being a good man you always applauded me.
I guess in you, you saw some of me.
Yeah both from the hood
With a similiar mentality.
I kept it ill you kept it street.
But the respect remained, in my inbox you came.
And alot of love you would always display.
The first one to tell me join the spitterz.
It wasn't until the third time I did it.
Remember, you kept getting on my case.
Damn, I wish you could do that today.
My emotions are embraced by my layers.
But when I heard you was gone
I said a "Thugs Prayer".
I reminicse & recollect.
Losing a fam member has that effect.


I know its still a question
If heaven got a ghetto.
And if it does I know you running that.
And no that is not "The Devils Calling".
"Through Gods Eyes" you'll be seen as warrior.
"Life's A Bitch" so I poetically cry.
Cause your "Inner Thoughts"
Was a "Spitterz Delight".
So you can not be "Poetically Silenced".
Cause to your memory we are "Holding On".
And not physically but your "Life Goes On" boy .
Cause we know all the "Meaning Behind Doughboy".
So look after Demarcus.
Jayden and the 4 seeds that came from Roxie.
And Holla's as well down here its hell.
For us to cope
But we know you will guard them well.
And I got Kiki Mari & MJ.
And I'll be the man
You knew I was before your last day.
And for you I'm a keep it hood fly.
So I'm a elevate the B's to the sky.
And your memory will never die.
So in reality we should be celebrating your life.

Keep a place for us in paradise...


Sincerly,

Your lil homie Blakk Rose
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Date Submitted: Jun 18, 2009 (03:32 AM)
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  Variator
11/09/09 (03:36 PM) 
this piece is deeper than the deepest ocean homie truth life emotions, never knew or talked to doughboy but he sounds like he was a good man...sorry for the loss man

  *Nafeesah*
06/26/09 (01:05 AM) 
OMG!! i did not know of this! this is so sad, omg i'm about to cry. beautiful tribute B. Rose, he will be missed :(...

  Lovespeaks
06/24/09 (05:10 PM) 
Ashe' ( amen)

  Ladyoflyrics
06/24/09 (04:15 PM) 
:( tears......very well expression of love that simply lives inside of you....and now we celebrate...good pen B....

  Lil Mamma Rena
06/22/09 (12:23 PM) 
Damn I guess im not the only one who would miss him but u put so much love into this i no he smiling and he hoping we all will continue to write in his name forever our words will go on but not like this write right here this is a fav and if i cud give u all the stars in the sky i woyuld !!!god bless u

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