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"A Letter To Tay"
  by niKKi fetZ



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i have so much to say
we havnt talked since Friday
( not hearing from you is killing me )
by the way where are you ?
baby i really wish i knew

we would talk for like three or four hours a day
i was so used to that Tay
( i call but you never answer – i need your voice )
now you have cut me down to none
i would do anything to have just one

its so hard when you live so far
i want to be there but i need a car
( if i was there . . . use your imagination )
i really want to see you
but i cant and i don’t know whata do !

i miss you more than anything
- you calling, you talking, you playing –
( i try so hard not to cry but . . . )
everything i do . . .
reminds me of you

being on this site . . . reminds me of you
listening to this song . . . reminds me of you
being on yahoo . . . reminds me of you
playing the piano . . . reminds me of you
talking on the phone . . . reminds me of you

baby i love you so much
i wish you would stay in touch
( im calling you right now . . . )
Oh My Gosh ! . . . nevermind . . . it was your dad
he said you werent there – i miss you so bad !

i really hope he couldn’t tell that i was crying
[[ cus i miss you ]] i guess i do have bad timing
( i know you love me and im feenin for it )
i cant say it enough – i love you Tavy
theres nothing left to do but wait til you call me . . .

♥ ♥ nikki ♥ ♥

[[ not the best poem but i had a lot on my mind and really needed to get out some emotions ]]
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Date Submitted: Apr 14, 2009 (10:22 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (18)
  Traxler
04/18/09 (07:50 PM) 
I can ffeel the emotion in this.. great job

  j2sexi
04/16/09 (08:47 PM) 
i loved this piece

  MeganDia
04/16/09 (08:44 PM) 
I love the way you wrote this poem. Very unique style, and quite a relate-able topic. Great write, 10+!

  ARCH ANGEL
04/16/09 (12:15 AM) 
Sometimes its easier to try n move on then to continue to hurt over somethng that seems lost..

  Ahaijah2
04/15/09 (10:06 PM) 
damn.. i'm feelin dis one ma... i feel da same way a6out my man... 10 stars my fave...

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