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"A Love Like This"
  by Dimplez


Deep breaths are needed
to compose myself,
whenever your names is...
spoken,
thought,
mentioned,
I can feel the tension
released as I slowly breathe.
I can\\\'t believe the things
your name alone can do to me.
Which means,
who knows the drastic changes
my body will go through
if you were present here with me.
I can imagine fainting...
at the mere presence of you,
floating in the clouds with just one touch,
and a kiss? Baby, a kiss from you
would just be a little too much!
Your love alone keeps my heart beating,
being in love with u,
steadies the melody it plays.
As long as I sustain a love like this,
my body will remain - in a hypnotic state
satisfied by your love in every way. ;)
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Date Submitted: Oct 21, 2009 (02:51 PM)
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  (Floetic~One) ...
11/17/09 (12:35 AM) 
wow thatz the good effects of love there... beautifully expressed... amazing ink!

  avito
11/08/09 (01:46 PM) 
This is beautiful, know exactly what u mean, "can't believe what ur name alone does to me" just what I feel. Nice write dimplez.

  ButterflyDream
10/26/09 (11:45 AM) 
awww....such a sweet write with colorful,painted emotions.nicely done:)

  leezymleezy
10/24/09 (11:43 PM) 
SIMPLE DIMPLEZZZZ!!!....another brilliant way to sum up love...I\'ve come to realize that we are \"poetry opposites\" ...you seem to be able to write about things that I can\'t...lol...I can\'t write a happy poem to save my life....I love this tho.

  W_J_lyriC
10/21/09 (09:07 PM) 
Incredible write. . . . .this was just. . . . incredible. The way you explained your love in this poem was just so vivid, great poem. . . . continue to let the ink bleed.

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