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"A Mans Mistakes"
A PoeticCONViCT and spechless Collaboration


  spechless:

Listen ya know i neva ment 2hurt ya gurl
u were my everthing in they entire world
i neva thought dat i would be so stupid
please take me back im promise u im through wit it
i know u heard dat girl so many times b4
the times i said u was wrong and walked out dat door
but i know now dat i was so wrong
i thought dis relationship would last so long
but i messed up and girl i take da blame
des other girl they cant do the same
the things u do 4me they baby they make me complete
and i thought dat u would be the girl 2 marry me
i guess i made a mistake and it hurt u so
and now ya burning all my things even all da clothes
im lookin u in eyes and thinkin 2myself
girl i know i got some problems but u the 1 to help

  PoeticCONViCT:

How can i help you so?
you did what you did so the answer is no,
i`m lookinq ahead for the past i do not Know.
Yes, i heard it so many time`s
you was slick wid ya talkin even slicker wid ya rhymes
But you made me the fool
I said i would never take you back due to all thee lil things you do.
You can promise all you want but we have no futuree.
I forgave you time and time again now you wanna be mature?
Stare me in the eye` s put ya arm` s round my hip` s
but just remember that after i finish this burnin ..
all of mee is just what your qonna have to miss
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Date Submitted: May 19, 2007 (01:07 AM)
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  Its Ya Girl Br...
07/22/07 (08:16 PM) 
i like your poem it is very true every time a guy mess up they want you to take them back back but if we were to mess up they would do the same he just need to think wat he would do in that situation and be real wit it

  smooch
05/23/07 (07:52 AM) 
wow this was soooo true keep speakin tha truth awesome right alwayz smooch

  LAfinest
05/23/07 (01:04 AM) 
sorry im late but u know...everybody makes mistakes..sometimes...they aint got second chances n this was a example..nice write to both

  A.J. Rhymez
05/23/07 (12:50 AM) 
To Speechless, Yo, hold on man...But let go also..Meaning, hold on to the memories, but let her go! That's the way it is! Don't now if this sia real situation between you two, but just in case it is, then PoeticConvict, I know what u r feeling..Tired of goin thru the same shit time and time again...Sometimes we need to get away and breathe...Best of luck to the both of ya! But if this isn't real, then ya'll sholl made it seem that way. This shit was the bomb yo! Loving the flow of it! Very creat...
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  Google
05/22/07 (04:00 PM) 
o wow....dat wazs deep n true....and sad....keep doin you grl and dont take him back....lol!

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