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"A maze"
  by Poetic Aquarian


I am a maze
Everytime you enter through my eyes
You find something new to your surprise
I am a maze
Exploring my contents and contrasts
Allows your interest in me to last
Long enough to accept me in both present and past
Tense; keeping us connected like the triple play deal from Comcast
I am a maze
My intellect gets you insniuated
Each thought provokes your nerve endings, leaving you stimulated
And at the same time educated
Sometimes I can be a bit complicated
But once conversation is inaugurated
Both your body and mind will be, for loack of better words, fascinated
I am a maze
Writing has been my passion since my life tok flight
Depiciting my emotions based on decision of wrong and right
For 7 years I have perfected my craft taking it to new heights
No matter if people thought it was whack or tight
My purpose was and still is to give my words enough fight
To destroy ignorance and give people back their mind's sight
Allowing them to see the truth and live for freedom and personal delight's
Which is quite literally why I give meaning to the phrase, "This is why I write"
I am a maze
You have been hypnotized by me from the start
Entranced in my poetic thought
Provoked by my words that have pierced your mind like a dart
Upgrading your intellect; have you saying, "I'm so smart"
Reminding you of just how much of a part
I play in your physical; I am above all charts
I make women say I'm "Crazy good" like Poptarts
Overall, my mission is to take life lesson's that can't be taught
And express them fluently through poetic art
All the while creating a road map to a place few are welcome and that is...my heart
I am a maze
Are you lost, or were you able to keep up?
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Date Submitted: Sep 17, 2007 (09:10 PM)
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  Deleenaraggydo...
12/13/07 (12:06 PM) 
I kept up & enjoyed the ride, love your flow & look forward to reading more.

  ShaySoSweet
12/12/07 (06:54 PM) 
lol naw i aint lost dis was an excellent write its like everytime i read one of your poems i can see the picture so clear...10 stars

  D.K Lord of Da...
12/12/07 (02:40 PM) 
YEP I LURV DA WAY YOU PUT DA WORDS DOWN IN DIS WRITE TALING WIT DEEP FLOW. DA WORD PLAY IS EXCEPTIONA.L AND MA FAV BIT IN DIS IS ENTRANCED IN MY POETIC THOUGHT PROVOKED BY MYWORDS THAT HAVE PIERCED YOUR MIND LIKE A DART UPGRADING YOUR INTELLECT HAVE YOU SAYING IM SO SMART..

  etheric9
11/10/07 (11:20 PM) 
A conscious poet. Yes, you have fed me because I was hungry. Glad I bumped into you King. I will probable spend the rest of the shadow hours here to get up to date. Absolutely awakening

  Neurotically I...
09/27/07 (12:40 PM) 
this was nice...i liked the word play everytime i read your writes never fail to captivate...nicely done love the concept...

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