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"A Never Ending Cycle"
  by bumpy
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I Woke Up...Tired Of You by SlimCutta


I hate your ways
I hate loving you even when I hate you
I hate when we argue and fight
I hate it when we fall out
I hate that I don't trust you
I hate it that I even know you
I hate we can't agree
I hate I can't decide whether you truly love me
I hate us not talking
I hate that its over
I hate hating you
I love you
But I'm just so afraid of whats true and untrue
Afraid that my distrust is real
Its alive
And not a figment of my imagination
Almost 6 years
Of me and you
Gone
And then I'm right back at your doorstep
Still loving you...




Guess who.
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Date Submitted: Mar 08, 2009 (03:24 AM)
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  3rd_Coast
04/16/09 (05:35 PM) 
Good write... this cycle does continue with alot of people its crazy true

  big josh
04/13/09 (04:17 PM) 
damn you kinda took me fro a loop on dis one, wasnt expecting that ending, nice write though :)

  da black princ...
03/16/09 (08:45 AM) 
You shouldn't have to hate loving someone, but I guess sometime you can't control the heart. (cool)

  * ŔESURRE...
03/08/09 (08:16 PM) 
From love to hate, back to love. Nice job, as always ..

  B. Rose
03/08/09 (12:25 PM) 
That was a nice response... that cycle contnues with a lot of people yo... crazy...

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