GS Poetry Home
Home
GS Blog
Media
Events
      Poems      Poets      Submit Poems      Collaboetry      SoulCasts     


 
GS Poetry
 
     
           

Your Ad Here

   
  arrow poetic rymes's PREVIOUS POEM poetic rymes's NEXT POEM arrow  
     
     
  
"a poem 4 the corrupted"
  by poetic rymes


your father straight bailed
your brothers in jail
your sisters in the corner screamin booty for sale
your mothers to high to care
and you just sit back and stare
some would think its to hard to bare
but for you its just another day around the way
you tried to pray
but couldnt find what words to say
your life is a mess
and you always feel stressed
everything around you is destructed
this right here is a poem 4 the corrupted

© 2000-2009 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
search icon
Date Submitted: Mar 14, 2008 (02:44 PM)
search icon
Viewed: 111  times
user icon
Poem Favorited By: 2 Members
send the poem to friend
   
     
lock Log in to add this poem to your favorites.



comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (0)

No poem responses yet. Click here to be the first!!

 


comment icon  COMMENTS (8)
  Lyric904Lyfe
01/08/09 (08:50 PM) 
the song goes perfect with yah write, i'm feelin it 10 starzz

  Lex Libra Baby...
08/24/08 (09:34 PM) 
Had to fav this! How did you know yo.. Felt like you wrote this for me. 10 stars most definitely.. i can relate oh too well...

  K.A.S. THE LYR...
08/18/08 (10:28 PM) 
i like how you wrote this.i saw the pain for a person and not just the ryme.very good read

  Nilla
05/05/08 (02:27 AM) 
think it could have been a little longer BUT ii ain't mad atcha for writing this piece. nicely scribed, hun.

  Jaxx1108
03/18/08 (08:36 AM) 
You make me so proud poetic rhymes to call you my "true" brotha! I'm old skool so you know I was lovin' my Salt-N-Peppa :) Much Respect & Love Always! :) ~hugs~

Page(s): 1  2 
lock Log In to comment on this poem.
     
     
  arrow poetic rymes's PREVIOUS POEM poetic rymes's NEXT POEM arrow  



 
Site Links
About GS Poetry
FAQs
Testimonials
GS Gold Membership
Links
Copyright Information
Contact Us
 
Site Features
Buy Credits
Promote GS
Events
Collaboetry
Soulcast
Poet Search
RSS icon RSS Feeds
 
GSoul Baby-Tees
GSoul Baby-Tees
Support GS and urban poetry by purchasing an official GSoul Baby-Tee. Order Now!
 
Donate
Help GS continue its efforts to maintain a creative and supportive poetry site. Any amount is welcomed and appreciated.
 



© GS Poetry 2000-2008.  All rights reserved. Terms of Use | Privacy