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"A PUBLISHER'S PEN........."
  by THE REALIST POET


I picked up my pen only to begin where i left off, the words are so inticing i had to take a second off, the spirit in this pen is writting very vigorously, the paper has no chance to race me, speaking in tongues and flowing with the river as my pen talks it lets you know it's never been a beginner, always truth never fake to acknowledge this man, a write so prominent it had to jump to my left hand, stating phrases only the great Dr. King would say, praise the lord in jesus name and the pen lays down and pray, my writing are serious as the days are long, my words are long as the pen continues writes my mind begins to ponder,new ideas as my lines begin to vanish and thick words to cover them up, a way to write is with your heart, opening up speaking the truth as if you are true. There is no better way to paint a picture then visual confirmation, you allow people to hold a mirror to their faces to see the beauty instilled inside of them, you give them your heart to let them know what your pen has been feeling, and you open your mind so they can read your thoughts, deeper in the train of thought the mist of your brain lets out beautiful words, to touch like a pitcher and throw it fast like a curve to home base, studder through words and skipping phrases, having people anxious and waiting, to be portrayed as "The Realist Poet' is a honor, something great and profound, like the love of my hevenly father, as my pen to this publisher, runs out of ink, i speak.... another piece of work given by my pen top at the top im going for a TEN OUT OF TEN!
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Date Submitted: May 20, 2008 (01:31 AM)
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  hustle_conscio...
10/09/09 (12:31 PM) 
sounds like a love story between your mind and hand and the pen...with a little cocky in it! i love it!

  Truessence4u
05/04/09 (12:31 AM) 
Different, creative, and personal you make me see what you are conveying in a simplistic/artistic way and I love that...!

  kenna da boss
05/01/09 (03:36 PM) 
aye das some realist stuff 4 real i dont think that i could do dat 4 my self 15 out of 10

  InfiniteInMe
02/26/09 (10:32 PM) 
I love the content of your poem. It's motivation, and the ease of words within a poet's spirit. It's about the pen, the most reliable source of a poet's work. The most common tool. With that said, the only critique I would give would be grammar. I see this a lot in the poetry that circulates about this site. The words themselves are dope, but the structure lacks a little something here and there. So, for content...I give you a 10. For structure, I give you a 4. 7 stars total, love.

  Shanta`
02/25/09 (03:37 PM) 
wow you really let it be known in this work poet ...your work really defines poetry ...your off tha chain bruh! THe body really came alive ...topped the notch with the inspiration ...so amazing! keep that strong writing flowing flowing!

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