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"A Statistic"
  by Touch of Hope
  - This Poem is a response to the poem NO, ITS NOT OKAY!!!!!! by CoOkiEz_ReTuRn


i stand before thee a statistic
a 17 yr old black female
with the stomach the size of a basketball
no ring on my finger
and fresh outta highschool
class of 07 baby
but at the same time i laugh those
that say that i will never make it
those that are so quick to judge those that arent like them

i stand before thee a statistic
a 17 yr old black female
with the stomach as round as a basketball
raising my head to sky
not screaming for forgiveness
but crying in thanx for this blessing
a chance to live in a hell hole
and a chance to move up

i stand before thee a statistic
a 17 yr old black female
with a stomach as round as a basketball
now attending rowan university
letting my child know that mommy may be a stat
but that aint goin stop her from making it

i stand before thee a statistic
i've had my share of boyfriends
and my share of flings
but that doesnt make me any less accomplished
as the woman who's married with 3 kids
and still unhappy
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Date Submitted: Sep 09, 2007 (09:01 PM)
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  anjel
10/30/07 (12:00 PM) 
keep doing ur thing mami

  PoeticCONViCT
09/12/07 (12:43 PM) 
i love this ; very trueee. andd qod bless youu . cause your doinq somethinq with yourself... only you can do it cause we all know noone can do it for youu! .this poem was very deep and i can see it was from the heart !

  Mz. G.M.B
09/09/07 (10:19 PM) 
i like this...CLASS OF 07 and you got ya mind right...I LOVE THIS POEM because you are a statistic and you are making the VERY best out of your situation...i feel bad for those who don't understand that this is definently an accomplishment not only for you but for OUR people...i can tell you aren't just using your dark skin for sympathy and i applaud you...GOOD LUCK and make that baby proud!

  simplyG
09/09/07 (09:26 PM) 
not saying that this is the case for you but many people feel that so many people ignore advice and words of wisdon, do something, meet the consequences of the situation and then play up a bravado as if everyone is against them I'm with my people I'm just tired of deaf ones getting strong only after being weak...peace

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