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"A Struggle"
A big 4 and Lil' Shadow Collaboration


  Lil' Shadow:

I'm gone show u heard look here I'm back in the build look talk to me I talk back out here. Look I been through a lot out here see I try to raise my head up out the streets but I keep coming back to the streets cause this is who I be in the streets and that's young money I know my daughter watching me I just keep doing what I do for her, hold on for a minute u know I was thinking why hillside trying to stop me from leaving hillside see this writing I'm doing don't come from ya'll it's comes from the streets see I'm a real ass nigga so If u don't like then come here bitch cause I'm gone shut your mouth for u see I'm about the streets see come my hood u will hear them rounds going off there's nothing fake about me ask my people see me I got to get it out here cause there's nothing else out here for me see my dying days is coming please somebody just show me the right way see my baby momma been crying for days and days cause she think I might get killed out here can't u see I'm not worried about it cause I do it all out here look if I do leave this world I just want to see my daughter grow up all the way cause that's my heart and soul I would kill somebody over and that's a promise, see each and every I go home my daughter is right there with her mother waiting for me to come from school but I don't go in I be in the streets till I can't do it no more so look here this be young money I love u my baby momma and my beautiful daughter too

  big 4:

I struggle all my life i never had a father that loved me or a mom in the house i need you to see what i see i wont you to feel what i feel i did some bad things in my life but please dont hate me just love me for me i got in fights with people i love and with the police but lil shadow's help me help them unsand

  Lil' Shadow:

yea i be the leader that i can be out here see a struggle is hard to over come as i follow in the leadership i see my brother big 4 following and listening to what i say cause the bad way is not good see i grew up without a father too where i couldn't stand anymore i was left along in this world as baby, now look at the struggle it's gotten worse the streets is colded.

  big 4:

the streets are cold but so is life so be cool and dont do what me and my brother did we love all of you people be cool
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Date Submitted: Oct 12, 2007 (12:13 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 10/26/07 (02:23 PM)
Author: sexyma
Poem Title: wats struggle

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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  4esha
12/05/07 (10:50 AM) 
dis is hotttttttt 10stars ya'll boys

  glo
10/23/07 (11:45 AM) 
that was well written , and real 10 stars

  Ciara
10/18/07 (11:42 AM) 
Thats whats up... hott piece... keep 'em comin..lol

  mikey
10/15/07 (11:04 AM) 
GRAT WORK MAN WE NEED MORE BROTHERS LIKE YOU TO WRITE MORE RIGHTS LIKE THIS CAUSE A YOUTH NEED TO NO THERE IS TRAILS WE GO THROGH AND LEARNHOW TO OVER COME TROUBLE SO THIS IS WHY IM GIVE YOU TEN STARS GOD BLESS YOU AND EVERYONE WHO READ THIS POEM AND OTHERS FROM YOU PEACE

  DSD
10/13/07 (07:27 PM) 
that was hhot

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