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"A Substance To Drown In"
  by marcuz aka moo


So it seems
you’ve awaken me from my dreams
everyone amongst the living are fiends
all the children cough and scream
smoke muffles their cries
pills and alcohol rain from the skies
as everyone slowly dies
the whole world is flooded with a legion of little white lies
all the children are now sorrows
drowning in a sea of liquid courage
they all sink downward
arms stretched out
trying to call out for help
look at their cute chubby little faces
death is written all over em’
at least they don’t have to cough anymore, right?
Soon their lifeless bodies float on top of the ocean

So it seems
That my not-so-sweet dreams
Were interrupted by muffled screams
Purple smoke emits from the mouths of fiends
I’m awaken to a nightmare devouring my dream
with an unwelcome charge
It causes my head to hurt
But no one gives a fucc
The fiends laugh and get high
As they all inhale death
Then exhale life and watch over the corpses of the children floating by

So it seems
My haven is only in my dreams
And I hate to stay woke cuz I’m the only sober motherfuccer on this planet

A Substance to Drown In”
4 personal reasons
January 18,2k9

by: moo
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Date Submitted: Feb 19, 2009 (07:21 AM)
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  Ms. Smith
10/29/09 (07:23 PM) 
I read through that twice. Loved the metaphors...again...another great write.

  YuNeek
08/05/09 (03:27 AM) 
This was actually real good. It was kind of pretty deep too. Flowing nicely and everything. :) 10

  l marie
07/06/09 (02:50 AM) 
This was really good!

  a absalute sta...
06/15/09 (11:31 PM) 
man, that was so raw it leaces a tingle rush in my throat. mayne i see u a htown hard hitta/lovin it

  B-long
03/31/09 (12:31 PM) 
def likin this piece, gets me to thinkin.. good write ! tenstarz

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