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"A World So Cold"
  by Lil' Shadow


Hey every one I just want u to know I hold my own out here see my father was never here for me so why shed tear’s for someone who wasn’t here. Our Father who art in Heaven, Please Lord forgive me for that crack selling'... Thou kingdom come, thou will be done, these nigga’s dumb
Yeah nigga gave my brother ten years nigga... what the
fuck you supposed to do wit' that nigga they gave my uncle twenty years nigga..
Matter fact they gave my cousin life nigga... I can tell you how I feel nigga to
be on that' stand nigga looking' the judge in they
face nigga... and he gone' tell you some stupid shit like "life" nigga...
They sending' y'all nigga’s on vacation nigga 'cross the nation nigga, y'all
nigga’s caught up in the hype nigga... Selling' that white
nigga... I been there, done that nigga I'm from K-Town nigga they call that
Goon?? City nigga, you bring your' black ass there nigga, you ain't gone' make it
nigga... You guaranteed to go to' prison for being' black where I'm from
nigga I come from the mutafuckin' impossible nigga Now y'all nigga’s gotta
deal wit' me nigga I'm here! Look I been through a lot out here see I can keep my head up because I’m hurt but look at me now I’m out here trying to get back on my grind because that’s what I do best out I know a lot of people hate me want u come to the block cause that’s when we can go get them look I miss my grandma see she been here for me.
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Date Submitted: Nov 26, 2007 (11:04 AM)
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  lazyme35
11/01/09 (01:06 PM) 
I agree the world is def a cold place. but you def expressed yourself in this one 4real..great write

  HazeyyyBabyyy
03/25/08 (09:32 PM) 
this poem seemed to radiate anger and frustration, and even sadness... your words were spit like bullets piercing thru all the things and people that you felt have wronged you... intense write

  WEVY
11/29/07 (08:03 AM) 
nice poem sounds like u miss u grandma a lot but it sounds like u got a lot going on and a lot of choices to make but make sure there good ones 10 stars good work

  sexy.beautiful...
11/28/07 (12:05 PM) 
this was deep and emotional of a poem this was real talk and straight to the point well done

  glo
11/27/07 (04:51 PM) 
there was alot of different emotions from you and you talk about your life to your family life to you miss your grandma, i can feel you all the way, cuase i have been there before, 10 stars

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