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"absence of words"
  by mariposa


My words of expression
Are on the tip of my tongue
In the pit of my stomach
Residing in the depths of my heart
Yearning to transpire
But every time I take pen in hand
The words become stuck
Unable to transfer feelings
Into a written articulation of love



I don’t know how to satisfy this desire
To tell you beautifully, eloquently
How you always love me into a calming sleep
Secure me in your arms
Comfort me with the pressure of your body against mine
How you have no expectation of me
Allowing us to just be as I am, as you are
As we are together
Enjoying silence in the middle of the afternoon…



How can I poetically make love to you
In the same manner that we make love to each other?
Completely giving
Readily accepting
Enabling a physical and spiritual explosion
To amalgamate us together, forever…



How to lyrically create a sonnet
That makes you feel the love bursting forth from my heart?
Portraying the feelings of happiness that overtakes me
Whenever I think of you
Giving me a smile of radiance
That resembles the last brilliant rays of a sunset…



In what manner can I intellectually hypothesize
On the abstract concept of Fate?
Fate that led me thru years of doomed relationships and hard times
Giving me an illusion that true love is non-existent
But now demonstrating how those experiences
Served as Destiny’s stepping stones
Stones that have guided me to you…



I have no words to express these intense feelings and emotions
For they are felt too deeply within my soul
So deep that even my pen cannot extract them
Unable to transcribe them upon your heart
I can only pray that you know
That you FEEL
How profound and absolute my love is for you
For the words themselves
May never emerge…


~to my legend who compliments and completes me~

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Date Submitted: Nov 26, 2007 (05:07 AM)
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Date: 11/26/07 (11:49 AM)
Author: ...Da Fortitude...
Poem Title: ...Our Absence of Wo...

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  a bonita vonit...
02/11/08 (12:15 AM) 
uhhh yeah. i miss this. i've felt this. and u've writtn wat so many have not been able to. u took wat was undescribable (i cant spell) and completely, in detail, EXPLAIN exactly the feeling . i dont even make sense thats how gifted u are =} XOXOX

  Doughboy
12/18/07 (02:40 AM) 
Got damn... this was some passion.... beautiful ... expressed with such class and creativity... Mariposa you know I always been a fan!! since way back!! this one blew me away!!

  Swallowed`Scro...
12/09/07 (07:16 AM) 
*sighs* i tried so hard to not bleed from these pieces...maybe i should've just avoided reading them altogether :-) never that! ooh dearest mari *shakes head* i cannot begin to tell you how utterly happy i am for you two...no wait, i think i already did :p but the way you portrayed that in this...so much left unsaid and yet...saying it all in the silence...my favourite line was that one "Enjoying silence in the middle of the afternoon" *sighs* one of my favourite things, to just sit in silence a...
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  a bonita vonit...
12/05/07 (05:16 PM) 
.... im speechless. this is without a seinlge doubt in my bones the sweetest, intellectual, poetic love letter i've read. transfer frum the feeling of not being able to write n being stuck, writers block. n u unleash and pour out ur entire soul, and if this isnt all the love u have then ... i cant imagine more. it makes ME question my love lol. u have a beautiful mind XoX

  Sandy Vaccaro ...
11/28/07 (07:00 PM) 
U did a great job of expressing ur sweet & tender emotions! Very well written poem.

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