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"Absent-minded He"
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- Shadowed Thoughts


He said he could love me
and aside from all the romance
he would always be a friend to me
but where was he...
where was that friendship when I needed him
because the news threw me down to my knees?

he said he would always be my boy
and even if he wasn't always my man
that he wouldn't use our friendship as
a toy
and throw it away simply because there
couldn't be more
but where was my boy...
where was he when I needed an ear to listen
and a shoulder to cry on?

He said just cuz we weren't together it
didn't mean that he would treat me any differently
but I wish he would
I just need him to be there for me
ain't even asked for anything more than just a
hand to reach out cuz his girl was in need
but where was he?!?!

he wasn't there for me.
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Date Submitted: Sep 20, 2008 (06:49 PM)
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  Nilla
10/10/08 (06:18 PM) 
*frowns* this has Nip's name all over it for me. i wanna scream at him sometimes like WHERE THE FUCK WERE U, NiGGA!? and the fact that i get so angry behind makes me wanna choke him out. *sighs* beautifully, yet so heartbreakingly scribed, O.

  LAB **Ms. Cool...
09/22/08 (04:07 PM) 
im sure everyone tries to keep things from becoming strange,... comes with the territory though ma, hate u feelin this.

  unforgivenange...
09/21/08 (08:43 PM) 
this is sad. I am sorry for your pain.. Relationships are so complex and they do get strange. Grea write feeling your emotions all the way through. Hang tuff, it will be ok. Peace :)

  `Scriptixz
09/21/08 (08:58 AM) 
i know this feeling all too well- i do *sighs and cuddles you* you can never say that `O don't put her heart and soul into everything she writes because this was real life heartfelt shit that moved and bled me

  .Always.Catali...
09/20/08 (07:14 PM) 
I know the feeling...but be on some shit like...I saw it being that way before it ended - so i never xould find a need that I needed him for...feel me?...cause if you coulda been friends...it would play out in the way you walked toward the end...but maybe that's just me...

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