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"Acceptance ..."
  by Reminisce


its hard to know the unknow yet avoid the inevitable,
even though the the road before was long ago confirmed as credible...
we take the time to enjoy the moment not wanting to accept ,
or to believe in what we knew would be conceived...
OUR destiny...
if we had such a word to describe us
as wishful thoughts deprive us ....
If only I would have known that this would divide us
I could reverse all the pain and hurt emotions inside
if only then i would've realized .....
that what we had were differences ,
a future to behold was not meant for us...
so now i must go never to look back and gaze upon,
the Love that I grew fond of that made me strong....
this chapter of embrace must now come to past,
next time i will accept the signs of a love that shall not last ......




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Date Submitted: Apr 07, 2008 (11:09 AM)
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  MR. BYRD
07/04/09 (07:48 PM) 
had to go back to the first piece that you started with on here....love the flow, the message and the passion of your work...keep it up..

  Jody
07/04/09 (05:01 PM) 
Nice... you have me really wanting to respond, can relate to the emotions presented... enjoyed.

  Hank
12/25/08 (10:03 PM) 
WHOA!!! You bared your soul on this one Kid!! I'm feelin' this one 100! Very original and heartfelt.

  mindbenda
04/10/08 (01:20 PM) 
wow this was short but so powerful im loving your word play and your concept was amazing you really brought fourth such a vivd picture like your words were alive im deff giving you ten starzzz for this and an instant fav

  T.R.I.G.G.U.S.
04/08/08 (12:09 PM) 
accepting an undesired ordeal put before us is never pleasant. but that leads to destiny's acceptance. is destiny written? destined to go through what has to fulfill the ultimate plan. is that destiny bendable or rewritten everytime you have to accept a circumstance? feeling the write, really had me think a bit. guess i'll just accept these after thoughts.

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