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"Accursed One"
  by PoeticSoulja


Rocket Man - Elton John

Spiraling throughout the confines of outer space
Continuously doubts his reasons to live on Earth
These ruthless emotions torment the expression of my face
An immense diamond steadily decreasing in self worth

Truly an extraterrestrial when coexisting with others
Fading away in the same process as bell bottom jeans did
Loneliness loves me and guides me like an older brother
The substance of limpid tears becomes undeniably putrid

Space provides everlasting silence upon my ears
My heart resembles the structure of Pluto's surface
Happiness appears to come only once a light year
Fate banishes me to this endless ominous place

Henceforth I'll glide freely with my burdening emotions
A wandering losing faith in accomplishing his goal
Forced to make traveling space my prime devotion
Slowly drifting off into the mouth of a black hole.

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Date Submitted: Aug 09, 2008 (02:28 PM)
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  Magic101
08/26/08 (08:23 AM) 
very well expressed my brotha. this iz a powerful lovely piece. the background iz awesome i like it. great piece! 10 starz

  Rukiya Faizah
08/23/08 (03:52 PM) 
I know that sometimes I feel like an outcast even though I may be surrounded by people who care about me....like maybe I was born in the wrong time period. But now that I've read this piece, maybe I'm an alien. ha ha ha...i'm laughing but i'm not laughing. "My heart resembles the structure of Pluto's surface"...that is deep. Nice, nice.

  King.Shadow(Le...
08/21/08 (10:02 PM) 
once again the flow was potentially a reach for the sky... the write was marvelous and a massive explosion of greatness... keep it up soulja

  ~* La Princesa...
08/20/08 (09:34 PM) 
"lonliness loves me and guides me like an older brother" that was a very powerful line-which i can relate to all to well. and i must add the backround you picked to put on this piece nice touch.

  Snickaz
08/15/08 (05:57 PM) 
you definately have got talent. i love how this has so much emotion so much feeling...10 stars...

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