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"ADDICTED (a Lyrical Divas Challenge)"
  by Untouched_Soul


You have spun me into to this web of desire
And I do not wish to be freed as
Words drenched in lust
Fall on my hungry skin and disappear
Into the deepest core of me
T O U C H I N G
Places once locked in the dungeons of loneliness
S E D U C I N G
Even my fingertips to do your bidding
Along the curves of my femininity
I am in too deep
Dreams soaked with even the scent of you
Plague my unconscious state
But even then I dare not wake
As everything reminds me of you
I hear your voice in the wind
I imagine the softness of your lips
Against the nape of my neck
Warming my soul
With a serenity meant for angels
I fall for sugar coated verbs
Contaminated with your passion
And your hedonistic prose
Only meant to send me into a state of delirium
So I can know myself as nothing else but your sexual slave
I crave
What your body would do to mine
As hands lock in between the rush of time
And slow rhythms bounce against euphoria
Sweat drip from pores
And sheets become wet with temptation
I am addicted to this hallucination
That you have painted in my mind
By words not meant to leave your lips
And fall on my ears
For they are too delicious to mean anything more
Than impulse
I am addicted to this salacious fantasy
Carefully constructed by
You
And
Me
As fingers tapped against keys
On lonely nights
And cold angry days
I am addicted to this foreplay
Hours and hours of delectable banter
Mind boggling ...nirvana
I am addicted to a satisfaction
Way beyond any touch
As our hands have never met
And yet
I AM A D D I C T E D...
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Date Submitted: Jan 05, 2009 (05:22 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/29/09 (11:42 AM)
Author: RahsaanAli37
Poem Title: Addicted 2

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comment icon  COMMENTS (20)
  vandal
07/14/09 (09:36 PM) 
u sure no how to keep a readers attention, i was hooked from the 1st line, you have a very unique style of writting, 10s

  Mr sexual4evas...
06/21/09 (10:32 AM) 
wow...

  mscoffee
06/19/09 (02:00 AM) 
Art at it's best, the creativity that showed in this piece is so profound leaving your fellow poets even longing for more. One can only help but to grasp every single word and hold on for dear longing to see what's next! Art, Art, Art, I am a fan of your poetry continue to write for you are truly talented!

  LyricallyDelic...
06/08/09 (12:16 PM) 
Nothing more clearly illustrates how you've captured my personal vice as these.."I am addicted to this hallucinationThat you have painted in my mind." Well scribed poetess.

  Poetic Lyricis...
06/05/09 (04:27 PM) 
Your words are breath taking and the mets are amazing--I love your unique flow and your ability to manipulate words

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