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"Addicted"
  by Reminisce


I love you,
I need you,
I wanna breathe you,
I wanna see you,
Can I touch you,
Can I see you,
I wanna hear you,
Can you call me?
Do you think of me,
Why am I falling?

Am I lovely?
Do you smell me,
Do you need me ,
Can you tell me,
What your feeling,
are you rebelling?
from my love,
why are you tearing?
my heart,
my soul,
my mind,
let go,
but I cant,
let you go,
'cause i cant live solo,

I need you by my side,
Im your chick,
we'll survive,
through this pain,
that we've gained,
from this love..its a game,

but your heart,
isnt there,
where'd you go,
dont you care?
cant you see,
that its me,
your whole life,
where is he?

so your gone?
but not far,
i see you ,
your my star,
i want you near,
close to me,
your new girl i envy...

you've moved on,
im not close,
im withdrawing,
need your dose,
prescribe me ,
with your heart,
fill my life,
press restart,

I'm missing,
your kisses,
your hugs,
I've depicted,
I'm restricted,
convicted,
from your love,
still ADDICTED........






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Date Submitted: Apr 08, 2008 (03:30 PM)
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  Hank
07/04/09 (06:41 PM) 
Feeling this one Kiddo...You got into the mind of a real addict...Had those feelings like that a or two myself. Keep that pen moving pretty lady.

  11th Wonduh
04/15/08 (06:36 PM) 
must be the day i've had cause this is another stellar piece of writing. or is it the mood that i'm in. nonetheless, good write

  ☸۞...
04/14/08 (12:07 PM) 
the way u use ur words....just delicious...that's all i can say....

  Ms. Sincerious
04/14/08 (10:05 AM) 
WHOOOOOO!!! I LOVED THIS.. your flo was impeccable and the build up to the end was amazing.. 10 stars

  Pololeon23
04/08/08 (11:40 PM) 
Wow....very beautiful....love your flow....the passion runs thru this...craving that touch of a former lover...so your gone? but not far, i see you , your my star, i want you near, close to me, your new girl i envy....PRICELESS...10S FROM ANOTHER ATLIEN

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