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"Adding Adam's Addition"
  by leethal
  - This Poem is a response to the poem DECIPHERING EVE'S MATH by --->QUEENPIN OF THE INK P...


I agree wit you on that love tip
Erosions of emotions is somethin’ I can’t groove wit
Eve, move bitch and give me back my rib
I’ll keep the remote control and you keep the women’s lib
By my own admission, adding you was a failed addition
Received promises of submissions on this failed mission
Of having and holding til death do we part
Well, I’m cool wit your death so where do we start
Be fruitful and multiply after subtracting the relationship
I guess God thought I’d be on some elation tip
Yeah, I like gyrations and shit, but not the “whole nine”
She be on that feeding me poisons like the “Old times”
Old crimes of passion from actions of consenting adults
Doomed to consume ripe apples is like mental assault
God, my pass fault, but the devil made me do it
Not Satin, but that devil that I screw wit
I knew this would lead me down the wrong street
Neva trust a big butt in a fig leaf
Dig me? Big Lee found out the hard way
Kissed the lips of that trick and now I’m scarred today
The “Garden of Eden” was seein’ to believin’
But 1 me + 2 demons = we be leavin’
Subtract my rib, carry the bitch, subtract my home
Equals losin’ flesh of my flesh and my bone
So basically, if I leave this equation she gets half of my creations
Man, that’s some bullshit, please excuse my sanitations
This is “WO”manipulations on the real tip
Why couldn’t he create me a real bitch!?
She conceal shit when she subtracts the truth
Adding that apple to my chords is just part of the proof…

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Date Submitted: Sep 19, 2009 (08:42 AM)
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  *Miss Toya*
09/21/09 (01:59 PM) 
you was doing too much here...your wordplay was off the chain!

  The Clinician
09/20/09 (03:04 PM) 
Sick word play. Your metaphor of God's first human creations is something that can definitely not be duplicated. Keep carving out your authenticity with your poetry my brotha, but don't forget not all females are like that.

  piss a mofo of...
09/20/09 (12:10 PM) 
yea man, i see you are blazing up the Poetic airwaves with your pen and the forecast is no end in sight....johnnie blaze on this piece!!!

  คว...
09/20/09 (12:10 AM) 
damn lee, you got my ass smiling so damn big over here....queenpin aint lying..the wordplay in this was on a whole nother lever....."why couldn't he create me a rea bitch!?" you had me like WOOOOOOOOOOOWWWW!!...Amazing drop....Serious INK!!!

  --->QUEENPIN O...
09/19/09 (06:33 PM) 
OH SHIT!!!!!! "She conceal shit when she subtracts the truth Adding that apple to my chords is just part of the proof" <---SEE MAN THIS IS THE SHIT RIGHT HERE THAT MAKES U SAY "FUCK...WHY DIDNT I THINK OF THAT" THIS WAS DOPE ON SO MANY LEVELS....INSANE WORDPLAY...DOPE REFERENCES...AND THE "Neva trust a big butt in a fig leaf" <---THAT SEALED THE DEAL FOR ME...LOVED THIS!!

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