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"After The Shower"
  by TANAKA
  - This Poem is a response to the poem in the shower by sexy azz brownsugar


Now we’re getting out the shower
And I can’t believe it
That’s the best nut I’ve had
And you helped me achieve it.
So, I’m drying you off
Rubbing your body with hot oil
And you have to admit, Girl,
I’ve got you spoiled.
Now I’m painting your toe nails
And blowing them to dry
As my hand creeps slowly up your thigh.
As you start to moan
You let down your guard
Because you can feel me
Getting back on hard
I turn on a flick
Because you told me to
And we play that game called,
“Do What They Do..”
So we start out in Missionary
Then the Lotus, then Cowgirl
Then the Pile Driver, the Wheelbarrow
And then the Secret Squirrel.
Then the T-Square, the Running Man
And the Standing Sixty-nine.
Then you beg for Doggy Style
So I can smack that behind.
We go on for hours
Until there’s nothing left
And I can truly say
That you fucked me to death.
Now I’m lying on my back
Looking up at the ceiling
And I think that I
Just might be catching feelings
And just as I’m
Expressing your sexual powers.
You say to me,
“Let’s take another shower.”
-Tanaka
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Date Submitted: Nov 21, 2007 (03:37 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (9)
  Poetik SisTAU
03/03/08 (06:52 PM) 
aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwww that was HOT!!! keep um commin!!!

  Deleenaraggydo...
01/03/08 (05:58 PM) 
loved this response, good flow, made me smile. :-)

  Unique Deja
12/31/07 (02:35 PM) 
dayum yo...u can spoil me..dat sounded rite mi boi...lolz...great poem..10 strz!

  unspeakable_tr...
11/25/07 (02:47 AM) 
simply nice.

  Shamma
11/24/07 (04:53 PM) 
i ove it mucho! alot of positions...reminds me of my husband...he hates when i shower by myself. the shower scene is very familar to me.

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