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"Aiming for Birdie"
  by MzSpoon aka Lyrical Diva No. 1
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Playing Under Par by mikeb30


His approach was right as he surveyed the slope
ogling the layout for mysterious curvatures…
He took a glance or two to make sure he was well prepared
With the wedge securely clinched in his hands.
He moved with suave and steady movements
Swinging off of the initial tee…
and
“Oh! Did it soar!”
He has reached feats that most men have bragged about
To their buddies and whomever would listen,
but has never really truly achieved.
“Did he make birdie?” you ask.
Naw,
it was more like EAGLE…
and
I’ve been flying ever since.


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Date Submitted: Nov 07, 2009 (08:17 PM)
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  H.H. Holloway
11/16/09 (01:53 PM) 
Dirty mind... lmao!!!

  ndependent
11/14/09 (11:08 AM) 
Love the calmness of your poetry! the comparison was dope too

  Shani. Medicin...
11/09/09 (08:04 PM) 
Nice and smooth....each word flowed into the next along with the music.

  Ordained2Chang...
11/09/09 (03:21 PM) 
I love the comparison here... It left me with a smirk at the end... I'm diggin the concept

  Cornfed
11/07/09 (09:37 PM) 
You must sit up at night and just vibrate in place! This was a thing of joy! Smiles!

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