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"Air vs Fire: The asphyxiation"
  by TheUltimateCure


apocalyptic Pictures, Images and Photos


Rankled and annoyed as obviously the Fire lord won’t stay dead, the Master takes a slow deep breath and as he does he levitates backwards and his eyes glows, dreadlocks of black lightening spews from his head,

His arms open wide like Jesus on the cross, and then he closes them with an ear shattering clap!

“Thunder” resonates across all realms.

The universe tears asunder and glimpses of the unspeakable show themselves, and even the dark one shudders, and in a voice to make James Earl Jones sound like a choir boy, the “Ultimate” shout’s;

***CHOOSE!!!****

He beckons with each hand, four fingers calling up different scenes in different dimensions,

A young girl of five is surrounded by a thousand straight razors and she sucks on each one as though they were lollipops and swallows them whole, and grabs a paedophile from a line of dozens, and rips off his head and shits down his neck.

***CHOOSE!!!****

Another scene is called, this time a head scampers on legs like crab claws, eyes wide in horror, as a macabre body rips off its own arm and chases it with the wet end to flog it.

***CHOOSE!!!****

Another scene, and this time it’s a golden sand beach with temperatures of a thousand degrees and a sea of nitric acid seething fumes, and every trillion years a twin headed vulture flies from the middle of this landscapes unforgiving burning red sun to squabble over a single grain of sand and then flies away with it.

***CHOOSE!!!***

Shouts the “Cure”

Or you’ll spend eternities in
Each
And
Ever – ry
One!


***CHOOSE!!!***

black lightening Pictures, Images and Photos


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Date Submitted: Jul 03, 2009 (05:42 PM)
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  Cedez
09/09/09 (09:17 PM) 
wow this was unbelievably amazing lol love how u keep the reader into it from start to finish keep on pushin that pen mister poet lol 10 starz

  Magic✯
07/24/09 (01:34 AM) 
outstanding creation bro... your visual iz so amazing in wordz... wonderful presentation too. 10 starz

  D.K Lord of Da...
07/18/09 (09:29 PM) 
Pure amaxing piece of prose you must at sometime do me the honor of collabing in darkness with me..You indeed would be more than my match...This whole piece is captivating , incredible visuals that take this demon into the depths of its core and enable him to feast of its infusion..massive respect DK

  geel
07/18/09 (12:22 AM) 
your have me hooked!!! This is a write, that is very descriptive ... regarding hell! Cleary u give the reader a wake up call...yes we all have a choice...salvation...or eternal damnation. WoW! Actually u would be great @ writing novels. i love it

  stranger
07/17/09 (05:23 AM) 
Threats of consequences make people believe anything through fear, that is the way of one false god , Satan, love is very different, but there are indeed the most terrible consequences for ignoring that we are love , we need to give love ,and life would be very different from this dying doomed world if men could yet love... most cannot... loved the metaphoric imagery... :)

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