Couldn't have said it better myself. Nicely written and u covered so many important issues.

yo i like this poem it's ho im new check me out

this is so true of a poem i don't want to say about it.....it was emotional why don't we stop this pain there's alot more we can gain

first off I know u aint new, well that new.. but I wanna welcome you to GS.... how ya stay is long and fruitful.... for this piece, you shed light on a major issue across america, well major issues..... and I applaud that... it is always good to have a message with poetry.... but umm it was too short tho my lady... I kinda wished it was longer and was more descriptive.. but for a start, this was nice... 8 outta 10 stars... keep the ink flowing

good write. lets help each other. keep up the good work