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"All that i got is you"
  by blacrob


for every mother
in a grievious state
ill make your pain my pain
and bleed in your place
wipe the tears from your eyes
and let them drip downmy face
ill pour them in a bucket
then pour them in a lake
but like a river
your pain runs deep
are you with me?
pain is cheap
we can split it fifty fifty
my mother single mom
people tell me not to aggravator
is this...really a game were playing
maybe to the audience
not the gladiator...
ahh youll understand me later
favor for a favor saviour
this life makes my faith wavor
can you see
my pain represents my prayers
i send my cares to heaven
and it seems like nobodies there
can you see my soul in my eyes
lifes made it hard to smile
but...
cant loose my sense of humor
i look to children wit the brain tumor
satisfied
but there rain came sooner
yet my blood is still fire in my veins
it seems there nothin but pain
im goin insane
seem i cant get it right
maybe...if i could live twice
if so...
kill me as baby
cuz i dont wanna live this life
my eyes adjusting to the night...
turning me into somethin you wouldnt like
trife
my love is dynamite
still she hug me
she dont understand that my past was ugly
and every time i look in the mirror
he mean mug me
i came from nothing....
like a rose from ashes
is my passion
im two people clashin
the person i am
and the person trying to keep my soul from passing
into the everlasting...
darkness...
im a product of my hardships
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Date Submitted: Oct 29, 2007 (09:44 PM)
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  hotgurle619
11/20/07 (06:42 PM) 
damn im jive diggin this one right here nice write ma dude.. 10 starz

  K-JiO
11/18/07 (12:30 AM) 
Pain for a lot of people is all that they have. I sensed a lot of disatisfaction woven throughout this piece. Seemingly not being able to do anything right in the sight of those who you love very much and whose respect you wantto gain so badly ... who hasn't been there. Good write. Keep cre8'in

  3cangel
11/17/07 (01:13 AM) 
Dis another deep one 10stz!

  Ambie
11/14/07 (07:45 PM) 
this power is very powerful..such emotion in it. I would love to hear this as a soulcast, i just know it would be wonderful. good right.. i love the imagery in this and the metaphors..keep up the good work..

  Hana
11/14/07 (06:43 PM) 
This poem is so amazing. You should showcase this. I started crying. 10 stars and a fav.

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