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"All the way over there (a poem for the shy)"
  by Angie Bee


he all the way over there
and as i stare
i slowly start to glide down the hall
suddenly i start to fall
head over heals
as i hear he's sweet voice
and what choice
do i have but to fall
in love
hoping that he will catch me on my way down
no smiles back
so i start to frown
drowning in my own thoughts
resentment for ever walking down this hallway
i hate myself for that
now i'm being bleed dry
as he's rejection cuts my heart
with each line
and now i'm just standing here looking stupid
man... fuck cupid
but then again these are just thoughts
as i stare
at him all the way over there.
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Date Submitted: May 17, 2009 (09:35 PM)
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  marcuz aka moo
06/16/09 (03:35 AM) 
ooow oh so simply short and sweet. i absolutly lov how you fliped the script at the end. i can relate to this so much that this sounds exactly like something that would have written. and for that reason alone i have to fav this write as well as give you 10 of them lil' gold thingies. beautifully written.....

  BlakkStarr
05/18/09 (01:02 AM) 
i know how that feels...im like super shy. Wish i wasnt tho. beautiful write from a beautiful lady

  B. Rose
05/17/09 (09:44 PM) 
Awww... shyness affects alot of people like for reals... and I enjoyed this piece yo...

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