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"Alone"
  by Artgirl567


Times i wakes up
In the moment
Wishing to go home
Hoping
If i click my heels
Three times i will be at home
The people they look at me
Like i dont belong
When im at home
My heart beats a slower pace
A beautiful Smile appears on my face
Not troubled
From day to day
I just want to go home
That where i long to go
That where i belong
When im there
Or outta here
I wont feel so alone
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Date Submitted: Jul 02, 2007 (07:11 PM)
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  foremanlin
09/28/07 (11:15 AM) 
keep writing what yur writin'. I like what you been sayin. It was deep. I give you a 9.

  Chu-b
07/08/07 (11:02 PM) 
i hope everythin is ok but good write

  snoopdg1987
07/06/07 (07:22 AM) 
great write like it alot keep up the good work much love and peace allways hope every thing works out for you take care peace

  Lil Hottie
07/03/07 (04:56 PM) 
damn gurl that was deep but I'm lovin it and some times i feel that to. gurl u did your thang

  88ELITE88
07/02/07 (11:34 PM) 
awww to bad you feel this way well yall have a place call home in my heart k lil mama nice write

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