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"Alone"
  by DaDutchezz


Lonesome
Lonely
Solitary
ALONE!
My mind full of thoughts
Forgives and forgots
Dead and living
The one's worth forgiving
The one's who hurt me
Broke me
My heart
1000's of pieces at once
The one's who hit me
Black and blue
The stitches too
The pain i felt
Just to prove
I wasnt
Lonesome
Lonely
Solitary
ALONE!
I look in
The mirror
At this stranger
Staring
Back at
Me
1black eye
A broken nose
Busted lips
Scratches
My face
Deformed
What does she
Say?
Yeah you
Guessed it!
"I love you
Baby.
I'm sorry I
Got
Mad."
What would
She do
Later?
Right again!
Another black eye
4 chipped teeth
I go to
My room
Dazed and confused
Lonesome
Lonely
Solitary
ALONE!
For a long
Time
This is what
Love
Felt like
A big fight
The victim
Always
Me!
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Date Submitted: Jun 10, 2007 (11:56 PM)
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  nikishab
04/28/09 (09:51 AM) 
You are a skillful person I love this poem amongst some of your others. I can feel and relate with you on this. You keep doing a wonderful job

  BLAXICAN MAMI
01/14/08 (10:09 PM) 
DANG I LIKE DIZ RITE HERE!!

  Browngrl86
08/22/07 (11:13 AM) 
Aww....unfortunately, this happen too often...great conveyance of this situation....

  Babyloca69
08/16/07 (01:28 PM) 
I FEEL YOU ON THIS ONE... I SOMETIMES WONDER WHY THO WHY DO WE LET THINGS LIKE THIS HAPPEN... WELL ANYWAY THIS WAS A REALLY GOOD RIGHT.. KEEP EM COMING...KEEP UR HEAD UP AND YOUR HOPES HIGH...

  QUINNEYBABY
08/15/07 (11:24 AM) 
THIS IS TO SWET, GURL YOU DID YOUR THING

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