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"ALPHABET KILLER..."
  by MAVRICK


How much force would it take to de-cap-itate a noun
Because in a life or death situation, my pronunciation must be profound
No sentences will be left unbroken, compound words will be broken-down
Verbs lose teeth when negatively spoken, adjectives need crutches and hospital gowns
Vowels of agony scream A, E, because I, O, U an ass whoopin, so don't try to ask Y
Verbal resuscitation won't be necessary, articulate mumbo jumbo, only found tears to cry
Limbs get torn off, for punctuation tools and shaped to pathetically paralyzed parentheticals
Eyes are gouged and ripped out, with optic nerves still attached
Visual resemblance of a semi-colon, because my foot caused your colon egg to hatch
Cause there's a thin line between Real and Fake
There's a thin line between a Poet and a Poisonous Spewer of Anger, Rage and Hate
So I took the time out to bring you both
But there's no hate, when I slit your neck and shove these words down your bloody throat
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Date Submitted: Jul 04, 2009 (10:30 AM)
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  DaddysGirl
07/13/09 (09:58 PM) 
concept is crazy & metaphors are on point. definitely a dope piece!

  KiNg-Go0B3r
07/13/09 (01:40 PM) 
yooo now this wa jus fuckin ill that vowel liine tooo fuckin killer, nice ink

  TheUltimateCur...
07/08/09 (06:26 AM) 
Ok you've made da fav list! Bril li ant!! he he he...

  *Miss Toya*
07/06/09 (09:32 AM) 
"Cause there's a thin line between Real and Fake There's a thin line between a Poet and a Poisonous Spewer of Anger, Rage and Hate So I took the time out to bring you both But there's no hate, when I slit your neck and shove these words down your bloody throat" *wide eyes* *hugs you* 'cause i think you need a hug you been writing with angry ink...backs away before you stab me in the neck with a pencil! this was such a dope concept...enjoyed!

  คว...
07/06/09 (03:37 AM) 
wow........absolutely creative....love your wordplay..noticed it has been on point in both your other pieces as well....and great flow as well....loved the ending

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