"Thicka tha thicka tha thicka thicka tha tha" lol! Yo, Common is my dude. Okay, on to the subject at hand: your brilliant write! Your choice of word usage was excellent. You drew me in and I felt as if I was on some sort of urban safari. I totally dug this 100 percent. Loved it!
10 STARS! Not only because of the message, but because of the way you portrayed it. You really put thought into this piece. I think the concept you used is... genius. An endangered species... beautiful... (sobs) ...reminds me of myself. -i'm diggin' the song, too-